This book is a how-to guide for how to write a successful novel. Does it guarantee success? of course not, but it’s full of useful information and ways to jumpstart your story if you’re stuck. It has examples and bullet points at the end of each chapter. A great resource for all novelists, not just those who want to breakout.
The Emotional Craft of Writing Fiction by Donald Maass is another good one to hone emotions in your book, but is quite different from Breakout which is focused on the elements of story that sell.